A Poem

This is just a poem. I like it because it is about someone's dream. Tell me what you think about it.

Hidden and Drowning
I appeared
on a frozen lake
with only shorts
and a tank top
I was shivering
and there was snow
all over

Suddenly,
I fell through
the ice
and was shocked

all the sudden
my arms got caught
in my tank top
I couldn't breath
and then

I suddenly
woke up
I was holding
my breath
I was scared
and my breath
was ragged
Fear

I do too much
I do more
and more
and more
I don't know
what to do
or who I am
But I pretend
to be comfortable
 in my own skin
i feel the need
to reveal
who
I
am

~Anonymous